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The best drawing I've ever made!

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~Dirk
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

After sitting, gazing, and pondering to myself for several intense moments...I think I'm ready to evaluate this piece. I know that you're clearly looking for an expert opinion.

This work shows great promise, and a strong, nearly tangible aura of ambition to better one's self as an artist. It's by no means perfect, though. Clearly you've given great thought to the composition. I feel that's the strongest part of this piece.

Some of your choices in color palette are weak. While you are very adept at toning your paints, there's a distinct lack of tints. This makes the image appear dim and muddy. Obviously this is a negative since we have such a strong light source emanating from the top left corner.

The line quality is high, as usual, but weighting is a bit stagnant. I think it could seriously benefit from some stronger attention paid to thick n' thinning of your lines.

The pose and weight seem comical, yet correct. Clearly you have a strong sense of weight and a general understanding of human anatomy despite the character design being a bit cookie-cutter in nature.

For those that are having a hard time loading the image, please continue to refresh. It took me 7 tries before it showed up. The new dA update needs the bugs worked out of it. You definitely want to see this one. Despite not being his "best" work, as he so modestly put, it's still well worth a look.