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Piranha Plant Problems by Themrock Piranha Plant Problems by Themrock
Just for fun another Mario drawing.
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~Dirk
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A wonderful drawing! You are able to push such a well known theme into a totally different and original direction!
The drawing is funny, rich of elements and motion and never done before!

However, as you asked for critique, I will try my best :)
At first the composition: It seems to be a problem in more of your works, but there is not much interesting about it. Everything is centered, and your eyes do not know what they are supposed to see first. It took me a few seconds to see the Mario, and even more to recognize him. With the background and its colors you can pull eyes a lot to the location you want. For example: The beginning of his jump, his eyes and the tongue.
I did get pulled to the tongue, most likely due the high contrast with the background. Not that high, but at least it is the highest.
You did a nice job on reusing your colors! For example his pants are the same as the water. Which I like and it helps a lot on making it a color setting pleasuring to look at!

The motion lines around the plant work really great, just as the 'folds' and such. However on the feet of Mario they are more tripping than that they make his legs shake.

In short: You really made a great and funny drawing, I am sure everyone will like it! The composition could be more interesting, and Mario could be some more recognizable , but you know how to handle low saturated colors, background frames and highlights!
Keep it up!
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elicoronel16 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This has been featured in the 11th issue of The Art in Fan Art ♥:iconkissmeeplz:
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xyz-a Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2010
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i did fan art of your fan art. hahahaha
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xyz-a Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2010
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i did fan art of your fan art. hahahaha
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chrisCHUA Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2009  Professional Traditional Artist
ha ha, sweet!
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lilpimpstah Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2009  Student Filmographer
I love your style xD
its unique and its so like energetic
I like the colors you use too
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RoyceAquatic Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2009
how fun, looks great!
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yukine-sama Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2009
This is awesome, great job.
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thinkd Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
super cool!!!
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Chopfe Featured By Owner May 21, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awesome!!!!!
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gavacho13 Featured By Owner May 14, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome. Reminds me of playing Mario when I was a kid...
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