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UPDATE: Changed the shadows, added the ear of Cornfed and changed the colors a bit.
'What the F*#§° you starin`at?' ~Duckman You don't know Duckman? One of the brainy cartoons out there and ONLY for adults. [link] Why does Cornfed looks so scared, you might ask.... well...you don't know what Duckman DID with his hand... ~Dirk Comments
This is a really great piece, I love the subject matter and the fluid shapes the characters make, as well as the graceful inking and spot on color choices. Since a critique is requested, I ill venture forth and offer my humble opinions on the piece. (my apologies for not having a pro account to use the critique application)
-I think Cornfed's left ear that is obcured by Duckman's beak should perhaps be poking out a bit at the top, the other ear is a little higher than the beak, and Duckman's hair is going behind Cornfed's hair, so that made me pause,I think the tip of his ear would be visible. -The shadows underneath them look almost more like puddles of ink, and are a teensy bit distracting. What if you tried a color for the shadows instead of the black? These are fairly Nit-Picky critiques, I think the piece is pretty damn strong, and only those two slight things give me a pause. It is always a pleasure to look at your gallery! OMG DUCKMAN! such a classic!
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